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I love listening to the old men at the donut shop, jabbering on about nothing in particular, clutching half empty cups over tables glittered with sugar glaze and pastry crumbs, jovially chuckling with the least provocation at each other and the daily foolishness of the world, each taking turns excusing themselves to the little room down the hall in the back, winking and flirting with the young lady behind the glass cabinet filled with sugar coated dreams, warmly fresh from the oven. Soon enough I'll be one of those old men, and be honored to join their ranks.


Thank you for visiting my home on the web. I’m not a webpage designer, so this will always be a work in progress. I have a few ongoing book projects, but I'm most excited by my novel, The Doll Man, a father and son story set in the 1950s orchard country of central Washington. It is now being edited, and I'll soon be looking for a literary agent to represent me.

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Since I was a kid I've always been fascinated with the story of the Mayflower Pilgrims, and a few months ago I released a paraphrased version of the original 400-year-old story by William Bradford, the most influential figure in the earliest years of Plymouth. This book tells their history from the early religious persecutions in England through their voyage to America and their first tragic year in New England, including what we now call the First Thanksgiving celebration. You can find more information about the book and purchase it on 

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MINING PATTERSON TIPS: Culling Writing Tips from James Patterson Interviews

I decided to find out why James Patterson is the best selling author in history, so I looked up a few interviews with him online. The fact that he is a workaholic comes through pretty clearly, but a good work ethic alone does not make a writer popular. Though it helps. [By the way, Mr. Patterson is a generous contributor and advocate for children's literacy, local libraries, independent bookstores, and cancer research, among other important causes.] But here are the most important tips I found in a few online interviews (see below for links to the original articles):


1. A plain, readable storytelling style that captivates readers early on. 

2. He keeps readers in suspense so they always want to know what happens next.

3. The main goal of his writing: tell entertaining stories that captivate readers.
* He does not focus on artistry, social commentary, or realism.
* If you don’t have an engaging story, you have to work much harder at your prose to hold attention.
* If you’re goal is to just tell a good story, the writing is faster.
* The story idea should be able to be communicated in one paragraph that catches someone’s interest.

4. Fast pacing in the story, with each chapter and paragraph pushing the story forward. Imagine the book as an engaging movie, keeping audiences interested, picturing the scene in their heads.


1. He first writes thorough outlines
* This speeds his writing process. 
* He doesn’t waste time polishing sections as he goes, because he might delete them if they don't help the story.  
* His outlines are about 60 - 80 pages, with one paragraph devoted to each chapter. 
* The outlines include specific goals for each scene. 

2. To help with suspense: he imagines telling his story to someone sitting across from him, trying to get him to hang upon every word until the end. 

3. Limited description: he uses just enough description to help picture the scene and characters. 

4. He writes in short chapters that help quicken the pace. 

5. He works at finding the “voice” of the story first, then it’s easier to write it. 

6. He remains flexible with the novel, willing to change the outline for the sake of the story. 

7. He writes with confidence, so he isn't bogged down in the details of the writing. 


1. He writes seven days a week -- every week. 

2. His daily schedule: He gets up around 5:30am. After some writing (about 7am) he goes for a solitary walk for about an hour, then writes until 11 or 12. 

3. His office has few distractions. 

4. He writes about 900 pages of outlines a year. 

5. He has several projects at once. If something isn't working, he switches to another project. This helps remedy writer's block. 


There you go. You're welcome 

Here are the links to the original articles: 

     By Joe Berkowitz, Fast Company (April 16, 2014)
     By Lauren Schuker Blum, The Wall Street Journal (March 30, 2012)
     By Diana Page Jordan, Writer's Digest (May 19, 2009)
     By Noah Charney, The Daily Beast (January 29, 2014)

May 28, 2015

History of Plymouth Plantation: Which Edition Is Best for You?

There are several editions of William Bradford's firsthand account of the Pilgrims of Plymouth. Which edition should you get? That depends on what you're looking for. Casual reading? Help with homework? Personal research? This list will help.

1) Similar to an earlier edition by Charles Deane (1856), William Davis gives you Bradford's writings in his original nonstandard spelling, which is confusing to modern readers. There is a valuable introduction by Mr. Davis, and many helpful footnotes. First printed in 1908, this is now in the public domain, and free digital copies are found online. (NOTE: beware of several poor-quality scanned editions that garble the text.) If you want to read Bradford’s book in the original 400-year-old medieval English, this is the book.

2) Harold Paget (1876-1926) was the first to "modernize" Bradford’s spelling. He has a good 16-page introduction and a helpful index, but very few footnotes. Publishers of Paget's edition include: the Classics Club (1948), Vision Forum (1998), Dover (2006), and Amazon Digital Services (2014). First printed in 1920, it is now in the public domain, and free digital copies are found online. If you want a cheap edition of Bradford's history for casual reading, find a copy of Paget.

3) Samuel Eliot Morison (1887 - 1976) was a U.S. Navy rear admiral, so his maritime expertise adds to his credentials as a historian when compiling his numerous footnotes in this edition of Bradford’s book (first printed: 1952). His professorships at Oxford and Harvard (from which he earned his Ph.D.), his prolific output, and his many honors as a historian will likely keep Morison’s volume as the "definitive" edition of Bradford’s work for years to come. The original hardcover edition is still in print. The paperback Modern Library College Edition is more affordable, but does not contain all of Morison's notes, nor his appendices, which include some important material from Bradford himself. Francis Murphy's insightful 1980 eighteen-page introduction makes this edition worth having. If you need a copy of Bradford for high school or college research, this is a great choice – especially the original hardcover edition.

4) Caleb Johnson’s edition of Bradford’s journal is the only one that rivals Samuel E. Morison’s in painstaking research and the information offered. Though he is not a career historian, to call him a "lay-historian" would be a disservice. His website ( is essential for online Plymouth research and, as a Mayflower descendent, Johnson has a personal stake in his research. He is considered a foremost expert on the Mayflower passengers, in demand for interviews and guest lectures. The features of his volume include: many interesting illustrations, hundreds of footnotes (402!) enlightened by recent research, a thorough index, the inclusion of Mourt’s Relation (the Pilgrims’ own one-year report), and several invaluable appendices. Unlike many colonial historians, Johnson shows a familiarity with the biblical literature that so informed the Pilgrims’ writings and worldview. Using his own modernization of Bradford’s text, this is the one to acquire if you want an authoritative edition (for school or personal research) with thorough notes using the latest historical findings, and additional relevant historical documents. I have owned both the Harold Paget and Samuel E. Morison editions for years, but I wish I had Johnson’s edition a long time ago (I now own the Kindle edition).

A Plymouth Pilgrim, by Donald W. White
5) My own humble offering in this arena is different in many ways because it serves different purposes. My volume is a thoroughgoing paraphrase of the first twelve chapters of Bradford’s history, covering the events of greatest interest: from the persecutions of the Separatist movement in England to their American voyage, and through their first year in New England, including their early relations with Native Americans and the "First Thanksgiving." I include a timeline of important historical events that flow into the stream that becomes the settlement of Plymouth. Bradford's obscure historical references to places, people, and events are all explained naturally within the text as part of the story. This is not intended to replace authoritative editions for serious research, but to supplement them with an alternative easy-to-read volume that remains faithful to the history of the Pilgrims and the writings and worldview of Gov. Bradford. This book should be good for students and casual readers as a faithful---yet clear and thoroughly modernized---retelling of Bradford's history, a clarifying supplement to Bradford's original tedious text, or as just a good read for history lovers who want an easier, more enjoyable version of the original Pilgrim story.

CLICK HERE for an easy to read version of the original Pilgrim story.